One day I when to Jordan’s for a play day. We were at the river under the bridge. We saved each other about five times. Then we jumped on the rope and doing the thing that I called Tarzan swing. I didn't go into the water cos it was too rough but I swang around and around but once I swang around and again and again but my arms were getting tired.
Jordan reached out and grabbed the rope. For a bit we were laughing. But I would have fell into the strong tides. You don't understand how strong that the tide was. It was so strong that the water was coming up of the river. We both started jumping in. We both started falling in. Once the Jordan fell in and I quickly grabbed his hand and pulled him up.
I like the way that it was very funny and you included your friend.But next time could you put some more punctuation in.
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